fixing a technical report that is unorganized and has some incorrect information.

Could you fix the technical report attached? The information in this paper is very unorganized, and some information is wrong. Can you fix it using the same document and turn on track changes so I can see what exactly was changed. The report discusses a civil engineering success and a civil engineering failure and relates both projects. Translate the engineering achievement from the successful project to the failed project and claim the catastrophe could have been minimized or avoided had specific transferable lessons from the successful project been recognized and performed. Don’t explain non-engineering aspects of avoiding failure. Also, can you fix in-text citations and references by making them ASCE.